April 8, 2013

BLOOMin 'ell .... it's Monday!

That means that it's 'hai' time I wrote a Haiku.

Jean over at Pondering is hosting this week, and the theme is "BLOOM".
But not your average kinda Bloom.
No siree, the word BLOOM is not allowed in the 'ku.
Cool by me.

Promise of You

Promises of you
Lies dormant in my cold heart
Love will resurrect

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At 4/8/13, 5:37 PM , Blogger The Savage said...

Somehow I'm vaguely surprised it wasn't about Orlando Bloom... but then what do I know? ;)

At 4/8/13, 7:50 PM , Blogger Doom said...

Back at you!

Fresh taste of warm trust.
The fall of her open heart-
Love's immortal decay.

At 4/8/13, 8:33 PM , Blogger BlazngScarlet said...

SAVAGE: lol ... silly man! Orlando Bloom WOULD have been a great take. But, he's just not my cup 'o tea.

DOOM: Diggin it! :D
LOVE the first line ..... VERY visual!

At 4/9/13, 4:44 PM , Blogger Rafael said...


Nicely done...very dark and brooding. Great thing about love, is it's a lot like a penis...just give it a bit of refraction time, and love will bloom again.

Oh, and since we're sharing:

Slip'ry tongue 'twixt cheeks
Stokes a fire in love stilled hearth
Wakes a gaseous plume



At 4/11/13, 7:49 PM , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Blaze, let's see what you can do this Monday. I think you know something of the subject.




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