BLOOMin 'ell .... it's Monday!
That means that it's 'hai' time I wrote a Haiku.
Jean over at Pondering is hosting this week, and the theme is "BLOOM".
But not your average kinda Bloom.
No siree, the word BLOOM is not allowed in the 'ku.
Cool by me.
Promise of You
Promises of you
Lies dormant in my cold heart
Love will resurrect
Jean over at Pondering is hosting this week, and the theme is "BLOOM".
But not your average kinda Bloom.
No siree, the word BLOOM is not allowed in the 'ku.
Cool by me.
Promise of You
Promises of you
Lies dormant in my cold heart
Love will resurrect
forged in the pits of hell by BlazngScarlet @ 4/08/2013 12:36:00 PM
5 Comments
5 Comments:
Somehow I'm vaguely surprised it wasn't about Orlando Bloom... but then what do I know? ;)
Back at you!
Fresh taste of warm trust.
The fall of her open heart-
Love's immortal decay.
SAVAGE: lol ... silly man! Orlando Bloom WOULD have been a great take. But, he's just not my cup 'o tea.
DOOM: Diggin it! :D
LOVE the first line ..... VERY visual!
Blaze:
Nicely done...very dark and brooding. Great thing about love, is it's a lot like a penis...just give it a bit of refraction time, and love will bloom again.
Oh, and since we're sharing:
Slip'ry tongue 'twixt cheeks
Stokes a fire in love stilled hearth
Wakes a gaseous plume
HaHa...sorry:(
Rafa
Hey Blaze, let's see what you can do this Monday. I think you know something of the subject.
http://serendipitouswildmoments.wordpress.com/2013/04/11/haiku-monday-challenge-theme-is-persistence/
Serendipity
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